Favorite Finales: Top 5

[SleepyHello]

oh. my. god.

[ooshmaster]

JS Wrote:

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> Oh Yeah! Why? You dont know me? So you cant judge
> me? Only God!
> Why are you so evil? ninety-nine out of a hundred
> of fans of Elfman, are evil people, so your place
> in Hell. lol
> If you want we can fight, and i’ll kill you. You
> like, Big fat ladies, you can only judge people,
> pigs! Poor Danny, he have so many unpleasent fans.
> Poor, poor danny!

1. Oh Yeah!
A. Unnecessary capitalization of ‘yeah’

2. ” You dont know me?”
A. “You dont know me” is not a question
B. Don’t is a contraction.

3. “So you cant judge me?”
A. “So you cant judge me” is not a question
B.Can’t is a contraction

2/3. “You dont know me? So you cant judge me?”
A. Best if compound sentence: “You don’t know me, so you can’t judge me.”

4. “Only God!”
A. Fragment

5. “ninety-nine out of a hundred of fans of Elfman, are evil people, so your place in Hell. lol”
A. Beginning of sentence not capitalized
B. Unnecessary word “of” between words “hundred” and “fans”
C. Akward scentence structure. Try “Nintey-nine out of a hundred Elfman fans”
D. Unnecessary comma after “Elfman”
E. So my place in Hell what?
F. “lol” not in English dictionary
Note: This statement is purely fictitious and contradicts what you say in the beginning of your post

6. “If you want we can fight, and i’ll kill you.”
A. “I’ll” not capitalized

7. “You like, Big fat ladies, you can only judge people, pigs!”
A. Unnecessary comma after like
B. Unnecessary capitalization of ‘big’
C. Comma splice after ‘ladies’ – additional non-capitalization of ‘you’ if comma splice is corrected
Note: This sentence in general is silly and doesn’t make any sense whatsoever.

8. “Poor Danny, he have so many unpleasent fans.”
A. Subject-verb agreement – “have” should be has
B. Word “unpleasant” misspelled

9. “Poor, poor danny!”
A. “Danny” not capitalized

Yowza. That is a whole lot.

[SleepyHello]

That was really entertaining to read. Thanks!

Anyway, by reading that post you would think that someone with such an inability to write correctly would never, ever be able to write one coherent sentence. Yet, if you read his last posting on the thread “Descent into Mystery – MIDI transcription!”, however short it is, there is not a hint at someone who doesn’t have a grasp on the language, while the contrary is definitely evident on anything he wrote on this entire thread.

Mysterious.

[ooshmaster]

Mysterious indeed.

[chocothrax]

1.Edward Scissorhands
2.Edward Scissorhands
3.Edward Scissorhands
4.Edward Scissorhands
5.Edward Scissorhands

JS is a member of another site that I am a member of and his favourite composer by far is Elliot Goldenthal, so it’s not surprising that he has that as his first choice…

[Nin_Cherry]

The thing that IS surprising though: It’s his first choice for an Elfman finale.

[TheLastSlasherStanding]

JS wrote:

>So shut up little troll and go to the hell. If’ i’ll i find you, i will kill you! Beware.

LMFAO!!!!

Go to THE hell. LMAO

[Leccathu]

My top 5 favorites are:

1. The Nightmare Before Christmas
2. Sleepy Hollow
3. Planet of the Apes
4. Batman Returns
5. Edward Scissorhands

…heck, they’re all astounding!!!! *faints*

Gorgeous, Elfman. Just plain bloody gorgeous.

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